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郑俊斌老师独创“新魅力英语”授课的独特风格和模式 《新魅力英语》第一册第七课Impress, Without Overdoing 讲课时间规划(共75分钟) 一． 课文字、词、句讲解(25分钟) 二． 帮助记忆、背诵课文 (15分钟) 三． 英文求职信写作 (25分钟) 四． 与课文相关的辅助演讲(10分钟) 一． 课文字、词、句讲解(30分钟) It only takes 30 seconds to make a first impression. But, it may last for months or years. Here's how to impress at first sight: Speak silently. Body language accounts for 55 percent of a first impression; what you say is just 7 percent, says one study. How should you stand? Put your arms at your sides and lean forward slightly. "It may feel awkward at first, but it looks open and attentive," says Lynda Goldman, author of How to make a Million Dollar First Impression. Warm up your handshake. At parties, keep your hands warm. Hold your glass in your left hand. Keep your right hand free for a quick, firm handshake. Follow the "rule of twos". If you want to make a good first impression, use a person's name and offer compliments. But don't overdo it, says Goldman.
Don't use these tactics more than twice or you might come across as insincere.
Here is how… 常见这类结构 Here is how to find the way to our 第一次是这样找到新航道的。 Here is how to solve the math problem quickly in class. 就是这样在课堂上快速解数学题的。 Here is how to impress our new teacher on the first day of the term. 在新学期的第一天，就是这样给新来的老师留下如此深刻的印象的。 at first sight This English passage seemed not so difficult at first sight. 这一段英文刚开始乍一看似乎不那么难。 Fall in love at first sight.一见钟情。 account for=be=occupy (在数量和比例上)占的份额，后面通常接具体数字或百分比。 拆解这个短语： 先理解“for”代替、当作、等值 ①回到前面讲的例子：I spent one Yuan for the bus ticket. “for”等于/等值 ②Red is for danger. 红色代替危险。 ③ NC “N” for(就是/等于) “New” “C” for (就是/等于) “Channel” 理解了”for”就好办了，account 字义好理解，vi. 计算、算出得出……数字、结果，合计有多少钱、数字、比率 The boys in that class account for only 46%. 那个班的男生只占全班人数的46%。 What you say is… what 引导的是主语从句 What you say will be recorded by the MP3. 你所说的会被MP3 录下来。 says one study倒装句作插入语 study n. 研究，调查 One study shows that 60% of high school students don’t have enough sleep. 一项调查表明:60%的中学生缺觉。 Put your arms at your sides.自然下垂，即该放哪就放哪。 lean倾斜、倚lean forward slightly(身体)略微前倾(动作示范) The tree leans forward slightly in wind. 树被风刮得略微倾斜。 It may feel awkward at first, but it looks open and attentive.乍一看有点不自然，但还是会给人坦率、专注的感觉的 两个“It”均是形式主语，指代前面讲的“双手下垂、身体微微前倾”的那个动作 feel 看起来、感觉起来 awkward=unnatural 不自然、不熟练、笨拙 look 看起来会给人……感觉 open 开放、坦率的 attentive 注意、留心、专心、随时准备着的attention n. 注意(大家熟悉这词) 例子① 例子② 回到课文：It feels awkward at first, but it looks open and attentive. 乍一看这个动作有点不自然，但它给大家的感觉还是坦率、专注的。 million dollar= golden= valuable= important millionaire百万富翁(并非指某人的钱刚好精确到一百万)。 可通过汉语启发：四两拨千斤、一诺千金、百万军中取上将首级 warm up热身 Our physical education teacher used to say, “Warm up your hands and legs.” 体育老师过去常说：“把手脚活动开”。 keep …warm保持……温暖 hold your glass in your left hand右手握杯(动作示范) keep your right hand free (腾出右手来随时准备跟人握手)for a quick, firm(坚定、有力的)handshake follow the rule of twos凡事不过二 /follow the rule of threes凡事不过三 use a person’s name=call a person’s name别的东西不提，为何专提人的名字？打一个大大的问号“？”暂且不表。 offer compliments给、提供、主动向对方表达(在中学已学过)称赞、致意、问候、道贺 tactics手段、战术、方法=means=methods or不然的话、否则 might表达的意思比may 在语气上更弱、更委婉、更细腻、更复杂 come across as(非书面语)看起来似乎是…… insincere虚伪，表里不一。由 sincere词根在词头加in变成反义词。 类似的词：inattentive不留意、不专心的(复习刚才所学attentive), informal不正式的，incapable不能干的 例句： ① Yahoo! Answers - What kind of person do I come across as? ② If it is a proud moment for you, your voice will come across as positive. ③ Your teacher has taught many fixed writing modules(模版) for English writing tests, but don’t use these tactics more than twice in one exam, or 不然的话、否则you might come across as a copy writer(抄袭者，或类似于exam cheater考试投机取巧者). ④ we hope that Mr. Zheng will change his manner (=way=attitude=style), or 不然的话、否则he might come across as a casual, unserious and insincere person. (动作示范) 二． 帮助记忆、背诵课文 1）动词 2）用拆解文章写作结构的方式来帮助记忆和背诵课文(15分钟) 3）高频词组 本类普通说明文的基本篇章结构 1) 开篇(Introduction) / 开门见山型 2) 主体(Body)3段式，要点①②③各成1自然段，共同构成文章主体 要点①(1st key point) 支持这个要点的数据或例子(figure /example to support that point) 及针对性的关联解释(explanation) 要点②(2nd key point) 支持这个要点的例子(example to support that point) 及解释(explanation) 要点③(3rd key point) 支持这个要点的例子(example to support that point) 及解释 (explanation) 3) 结尾(Conclusion)/ 点题、简捷扼要结尾型 对号入座看课文 1) 开篇 开门见山留好印象 It only takes 30sec to make 1st impression. But, it may last for months / years. Here’s how to impress firstly: 2) 主体 要点①说话轻柔体态端庄 Speak silently/Body language account for 55%..., 7%...says one study 支持这个要点的数据或例子 How should u stand? Put 及针对性的关联解释 It may feel awkward at 1st, but it looks open and attentive... says Lynda Goldman 作者 of … 要点②握手热烈切勿勉强 Warm up ur handshake 支持这个要点的例子 At parties, keep ur hands warm / hold ur glass in 及解释 ur left hand. Keep quick and firm handshake 要点③呼唤名字适当赞赏 follow the rule of 2s 支持这个要点的例子 If u want to make a good first impression, do 2 及解释 things, but don’t overdo it, says Goldman 3 3)点题结尾 呼应题目：Impress， Without overdoing 两次为界过多不当 Don’t use these 2 tactics ≤ 2 or u might come across as insincere. 开头 开门见山 留好印象 要点① 说话轻柔 体态端庄 要点② 握手热烈 切勿勉强 要点③ 呼唤名字 适当赞赏 结尾 两次为界 过多不当 另外：帮助课文记忆、背诵的重要提示和辅助 1）．“留下第一印象”出现的频率如此之高，成为记忆、背诵的场景主线 Make a first impression① Impress at first sight② Make a million dollar impression③ Make a good first impression④ 2）．3个情态动词引出3个重要句子 It may last for months or years①. It may feel awkward at first②. It might come across as insincere③. 3）．3个插入语引出课文中要点的数据或例子出处，并配合和辅助解释 Says on study①. Says Lynda Goldman②. Says Goldman③. 4）．短文出现约20个重要动词。动词是展开这类说明文的工具和手段。借助动作示范来辅助记忆。 take 30 seconds last for months or years make a first impression impress at first sight speak silently say (what you say) stand (how should you stand) put your arms at your sides lean forward look open and attentive warm up keep your hand warm hold your glass in hand keep your right hand free follow the rule of twos use a person’s name① don’t use the tactics more than twice② offer compliments overdo(don’t overdo it) 小节一下课文 由于课文后面部分专门讲怎样写英文信，这是必须要掌握的部分。 三. 英文求职信写作 英文求职信写作(25分钟) [另外专章撰写独创的普通英文信写作诀窍，即以诗歌形式易熟悉、掌握的模板] April 13, 2004 Mr. Richard Chill mrchill@greatmusic.org Dear Mr. Chill(尊称，固定的开头):
I am writing to inquire about a part-time position as a D.J. at your company(开门见山，说明写信的原由). I am currently studying English at the University of Beijing. I was a music D. J. in high school and am now the head D. J. In my free time, I play guitar, piano and drums(架子鼓), I also record my own music, as well as my friends’(简介我是个学生，会做什么？会灌制音乐。 I am writing to do sth.表此时此刻正写信想表达什么 Sincerely, Simon Dale(传统的信后落款讲究) sidale@art.com(新潮信后落款讲究) inquire about询问 part time兼职 /full time 全职position位置，工作机会=job currently=at this moment=for the time being=now was 对应now I was in a high school in 我去年在沪念中学而如今我已来京上大学。 DJ电台音乐播音员/主持人 (disc jockey) disc盘/碟Jockey职业赛马骑师, (机器的)操作员/打碟的人 head DJ首席DJ head boy/girl尖子(学生)，优等生，班长 head teacher中小学的校长headman首领, 工头 free time=spare time业余时间 …as well as 后面引出并列部分… attach附带、附录、随信一起寄 I have attached my photo to you in my last email, please check it in the attachment. 在上一封给你的邮件中，我以附加方式也发了我的照片，请在附件中查看。 describe ability, experience in more detail更加详细地描述能力及精力 contact …at…借助电话号码/邮箱/写信地址等可联络到某人 sincerely=faithfully=truly英文信的习惯结尾方式 求职信的“8信”口诀 信有固定开头 信中说明原由 相信我的能力 相信合你要求 信中简历不漏 信里可提请求 信有联络方式 信后落款讲究 “8信”作为线索和要点提示，引导同学们背下这封信，并学会写出类似的求职信①②篇 ①教外国人汉语 May 18, 2005 Mr. John Smith mrsmith@foreigner.org Dear Mr. Smith: I am writing to inquire about a part-time position as a Chinese teacher at your company. I am currently studying English at the I’ve attached my resume, which describes my skills and experience in more detail. I would like to discuss a position with you. You can contact me at QQ123456 or at zhangxiaoming@teachingchinese.com. Thank you. Sincerely, Zhang Xiaoming zhangxiaoming@teachingchinese.com ②提供打字服务 June25, 2006 Mr. Gordon Brown mrbrown@typing.org Dear Mr. Brown: I am writing to inquire about a part-time position as a typist at your company. I am currently studying Secretary Course at the University of the People. I was a typist in high school and am now the head typist in a professional typing agency. In my free time, I use my typing skills in chatting in the internet with the people both from I’ve attached my resume, which describes my skills and experience in more detail. I would like to discuss a position with you. You can contact me at my home phone1234 5678139 or at wanglihua@typingworld.com. Thank you. Sincerely, Wang Lihua wanglihua@typingworld.com ---The end---
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